Really Bad Swedish

Showroom
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I don’t speak a word of Swedish. I need feedback from native speakers - does this sound really bad?

edit: i think the link is broken?

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The link is very definitely broken.

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is this better?

edit: it isn’t… I don’t know what’s going on

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it should be good now

edit: WHAT IS GOING ON??? THE LINK DOESN’T WORK.