Soundcloud - The Daughter of Lies
Feedback on what I could do to improve the voice, its post-processing and its mix with the instrumental track is welcome.
This one is the theme song of the first part of my trilogy.
It ties strongly with the prophecy from one of my other songs, Filia Fraudis.
Check that thread for the English translation of the prophecy and explanation of the story, this is what “The Daughter of Lies” is about.
While “Filia Fraudis” is written as an ancient prophecy which talks about my main character and her destiny, this song is written in the first person, from her point of view.
Lyrics: me (no AI involved)
Vocals: Solaria II
Music: Suno (AI-generated, with plans to eventually replace it with a human-made version)
The Daughter of Lies
Daughter of a prophecy dark,
Journey through shadows in my heart,
Revealing my true destiny,
Weight of an unknown legacy.
I’m torn between the light and dark,
A battle raging in my heart,
Secrets hidden behind a mark,
Fate unfolds before my eyes,
The Daughter of Lies!
Named true by the strange mark I bear,
Spiraling into despair,
Feel it through my soul searing,
Just like red-hot iron branding.
I’m torn between the light and dark,
A battle raging in my heart,
Secrets hidden behind a mark,
Fate unfolds before my eyes,
The Daughter of Lies!
Ripples of forgotten past,
In realization aghast,
My true nature, learn I do,
A path I cannot undo.
I’m torn between the light and dark,
A battle raging in my heart,
Secrets hidden behind a mark,
Fate unfolds before my eyes,
The Daughter of Lies!
Named in prophecy,
A symbol marks me,
A dark legacy,
Of shadows the weight,
The path of my fate,
Now I realize,
I’m The Daughter of Lies…
(The Daughter of Lies…)
Within myself must find balance,
To avoid this fate my only chance,
Bring both sides in harmony,
Path to shape my own destiny.
I’m torn between the light and dark,
A battle raging in my heart,
Secrets hidden behind a mark,
Fate unfolds before my eyes,
The Daughter of Lies!
Named in prophecy,
A symbol marks me,
A dark legacy,
Of shadows the weight,
The path of my fate,
Now I realize,
I’M THE DAUGHTER OF LIES!
