An epic power metal song (don’t rely at the beginning), opposing the high pitched Felicia (as the disciple), to the low Asterian (as the guru).
All suggestions welcome as usual 
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It reminds me of Ayreon, very cool.
I like the mighty synthesizer start, of course. Reminds me of Genesis, together with the first line of the lyrics. (“You’ve got your own special way”)
I’m not an English native speaker myself, but I believe there are some pronunciation/declamation issues.
Sound: I like the kick. I don’t like the snare.
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Thank you very much for your feedback. I’ll check the pronunciation issues (if I can find them ), and have a look at the snare to make it sound maybe less… “explosive”.
I changed some words and slightly the snare mix, with a little more resonance. But in the same spirit so it still cuts through the mix. I tried other approaches but without much success at the moment. And also put a synth track at the beginning which has mysteriously disappeared.
I wouldn’t have expected that you change something because of a single comment like mine! 
I always take comments in account when I find them useful 
Else I wouldn’t ask for. I always lack perspective when working on something.
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