Hello everyone. Unfortunately I have a very poor knowledge of English. I hope I haven’t made any horrible translation mistakes. But I think it’s better to try and fail than to do nothing. Thanks to everyone if you listen to it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNQfQg05X14
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I don’t speak spoken English either and I usually understand one word out of five, if I’m lucky enough to remember what that one word actually means in time. ( It jumps out in me my memory ). I admire you for trying. This is not about my vocabulary, but a feeling for the English language in musical terms is necessary. This feeling I have for my native language - Czech. And I’m grateful for that and that’s why the lyrics of my songs are in Czech. I like your song musically and I don’t hear any mistakes in the lyrics. It seems to me that it all works together. But I havent knowledge in English.
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Hi Gaudze, thank you for your comment. I am also in the same situation in the knowledge of the English language.
I am glad that you like it overall. This gives me confidence to put some more songs in English. Hoping that in the future my language (Italian) will also be supported.
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You are lucky that a large number of you from Italy work with Synthesizer V Pro (a lot more than here in the Czech Republic). In the Czech Republic, I am the only one using Synthesizer. Some of the Czech Republic have songs made by Suno. Alessandro Zocco helped me create better texts in Czech, even though he doesn’t speak Czech, because he is Italian. However, he has vast experience with phonemes and has also created Italian dictionaries that work with Synthesizer. Here on the forum he is called - AleDzMusicProd. However, he is very busy working on his perfect projects. There is also another Synthesizer expert from Italy - GafaCapella - and his scripts deal with the use of Italian. I haven’t studied them yet, but I am planning to. Here is the link: (if you haven’t read it yet)
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Really very interesting. I had already listened to some of Alessandro Zocco’s projects. There is a lot of work behind it and this is admirable. I had also tried to do some covers in Italian with SynthV but it really takes a lot of effort to have a good pronunciation.
thanks again
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Dear @RobyM ,
It has become normality for me to “write” songs in Italian with SynthesizerV, although I admit, I am looking forward to the long-awaited support of our language, which would make everything even easier.
If you intend to try your hand at it seriously, I tell you that even though it is hard at first, once you get the hang of it, you will be motivated to make song after song that will lead to steady improvement.
As for the English lyrics, you don’t have to put complicated sentences together that will pass through translators returning to listening equally complicated concepts to follow.
I advise you to take good care of the melodic line by inserting simpler concepts into it, expressing the same things you intend to communicate.
Keep it simple with the words , accompanying with an effective arrangement, where I see you are quite comfortable. 
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Hi Alessandro, thanks for your precious advice. The biggest difficulty is always to make a sentence fit into the metrics and that’s where sometimes in the translation I have to cheat. I’ll give you the lyrics of the song.
Thanks for your appreciation.
is the time for a new year
yesterday the christmas is over
the children open the gifts
and now my wallet is crying
is the time for a new day
yesterday my holidays over
my belly is to full
i feel like my head exploding
give me a painkiller be quick
I’m sick I can’t go to work
Santa Klaus give me a gift please
I want sleep again today
the holidays destroy me
the holidays destroy me
I want sleep again
I want sleep all day
Is the time to get out of bed
but the head is spinning so much
the old year is already over
and the new year is soon here
Santa give me a gift
give me something to kill this headache
I’m sure I ate so much
I feel like my head exploding
give me a painkiller be quick
I’m sick I can’t go to work
Santa Klaus give me a gift please
I want sleep again today
the holidays destroy me
the holidays destroy me
I want sleep again
I want sleep all day
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Thanks, I’ll take a look into it